“Another irritant is accidental rhyme, as in the sentence “When the rig blew, everything went flying sky-high – me too.” Notice here that the rhyme is offensive because both rhyme words, “blew” and “too” are stressed positions; that is, the voice comes down hard on them. The rhyme is not offensive, to most ears, if the writer can get one of the rhymes out of stressed position: “The rig blew sky-high, and everything went flying, me too.”
